From Miles.Ellis@Educational-Technology-Resources-Centre.oxford.ac.uk Mon Oct 9 20:48:38 1995 Received: from oxmail2.ox.ac.uk (oxmail2.ox.ac.uk [163.1.2.1]) by dkuug.dk (8.6.12/8.6.12) with ESMTP id UAA20075 for ; Mon, 9 Oct 1995 20:48:23 +0100 Received: from vax.ox.ac.uk by oxmail2 with SMTP (PP); Mon, 9 Oct 1995 20:47:23 +0100 Received: from 163.1.85.1 by vax.ox.ac.uk (MX V4.1 VAX) with SMTP; Mon, 09 Oct 1995 18:44:34 +0100 X-Sender: MELLIS@vax.ox.ac.uk Message-ID: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii" Date: Mon, 9 Oct 1995 18:45:30 +0100 To: sc22wg5 From: Miles.Ellis@Educational-Technology-Resources-Centre.oxford.ac.uk (Miles Ellis) Subject: CD Ballot Comments - 3 of 7 3. US Comments for Editorial Improvements 132:17 Change "9.1.3" to "9.5.1" 139:37 after "default character." insert "When a record contains any nondefault characters, the appropriate value for the RECL= specifier is processor dependent." 143:32+ Insert this introductory sentence "The FMT= specifier supplies a format specification or specifies list directed formatting, for a formatted input/output statement." 146:13 Change "an assumed" to "a whole assumed". 106:22 (note, this is out of order, and replaces an edit too 102:22 in 95-218, where we added a note) Change "an assumed" to "a whole assumed". 120:1 Delete "(12.4.2, 12.4.3, 12.7)" and, after "references" insert "(12.4.2, 12.4.3)". 128:6 Change "DO-variable" to "DO variable". 129:28-29 Ensure all text is in the obsolescent font. Some characters look big. 134:7 After "statement" add "(9.2.1.3.1)" 137:1 after "exist", insert "(9.2.1.1)" 137:3 Delete "(9.2.1.1)" 146:26 Change "derived type object" to "derived-type object". 149:25 after "next effective item", add " (sometimes referred to as next effective list item)" 150:25 after "for" insert " unformatted" 150:28 after "for" insert " unformatted" 151:29-34 Lower case Capitals on all but first word of second column [209:28] change "INstead" to "Instead" [112:29] change comment to " ! because SUM is transformational, all elements of A ! are processed by LOG, in spite of the WHERE." [113:22] change "forall-body-construct" to "". [113:33] change "B(I:J) /= 0.0" to "B(I,J) /= 0.0". [117:27] change 'shalll' to 'shall' [118:4] change "(I=1:N)" to "FORALL (I=1:N)" [128:6] change 'DO-variable' to 'DO variable' [165:35-43+] replace [165:35] with " is the numeric value of the decimal exponent ." and in the table [165:38-43], replace all ""s with "" and on the next page, [166:3] replace "" with "". [166:3] change "forms" to "edit descriptor forms" and add the missing "|" after "" [166:37] change the "-" before "500" to be the same "-" as is used elsewhere on that line [167:3] change "4.3.1.2" to "R414" [171:37] change "4.3.1.2" to "R414" [172:34] change "may" to "shall" [175:2] after "example", insert ":" [180:4] after "example", insert ":" [186:6] remove extra blank after "accessible" [200:14] change "can" to "could" [192:34] change "but an ENTRY" to "but an entry" [195:33] change "[::]" to "[ :: ]" [196:16] change "[::]" to "[ :: ]" [196:32] change "by implicit" to "by an implicit" [205:32] change "...]" to "] ..." [206:35] after "present", insert a comma [207:46] after "present", insert a comma [213:5] after "function", insert "actual" [213:7] after "shape of the", insert "actual" [213:7] after "If the", insert "actual" [213:8] after "all", insert "actual" [213:11] after "each", insert "array actual" [213:19] after "subroutine", insert "actual" [213:26] change "with scalar actual arguments were" to "had been" [93:16-94:39] reordert section 7.1.6.2 as follows [94:19-22] [93:29-94:18] [93:16-28] [93:23-39] [94:19-20] change "A <> (R510, R515, R516) is a restricted expression that is scalar and of type integer." to "A <> is an expression with limitations that make it suitable for use in specifications such as character lengths (R510) and array bounds (R515, R516)." [26:34] add 'that initiates a comment' after '"!"' [184:37] change "that entities" to "the entities" [193:22] change "MODULE PROCEDURE specification" to "MODULE PROCEDURE statement" [200:20,22] change "the default" to "omitting the INTENT attribute" and change "with default intent" to "without an INTENT attribute" [68:27] change "common block name shall appear in a SAVE statement" to "objects in the common block shall have the SAVE attribute" [109:24] insert a comma after "scalar" [110:10] change "STRUCTURE" to "TARGET_STRUCTURE" [111:19] delete extra blank before "where-body-construct" (if there is one) [114:32] move "A =" to line 34; page 116, lines 29, 35 (twice); page 117, lines 13, 17. [114:44] change "are" to "is" [115:9] change "forall" to "FORALL"; cf. page 114, line 41 [116:2] delete the extra blank before "may" and between "target" and "." [xiv:16] hyphenate derived-type in the following places. [xiv:16] (Intro) [xiv:18] (Intro) [38:8] (4.4) [38:35-36] (4.4.1) Only the "derived type" at the line split. [73-8] (6.1.2) [xiv:26-32] capitalize only the first word instead of each word in the following places [xiv:26-32] (Intro) Titles like "Data concepts" [14:4-17] (Table 2.2) Throughout the table, incuding its note [22:4-14] (Table 3.1) Table heads and body [84-87] (Notes 7.4-7.10) All the "Syntactic class" headings [100:3] (Table 7.3) In table head [100:36] (Table 7.4) In table head [101:23-35] (Table 7.5) In table head and second column body [102:27-33] (Table 7.6) In table head and second column body [103:31] (Table 7.8) In table head [104:3] (Table 7.8 continuation) In table head [36:30] add section 13 cross-references as listed below after references to intrinsic functions [36:30] (4.3.2.1.1) CHAR (13.14.19) [36:31] (4.3.2.1.1) ICHAR (13.14.45) [37:12] (Note 4.15) ACHAR (13.14.2) and IACHAR (13.14.40) [37:14] (4.3.2.1.1) ...LLT (13.14.56-13.14.59) [55:27] (5.1.2.4.3) "LBOUND function" --> "intrinsic function LBOUND (13.14.53)" [55:28] (5.1.2.4.3) "UBOUND function" --> "intrinsic function UBOUND (13.14.113)" [89:24] (7.1.4.1) NULL (13.14.79) [14:1] change "though" to "although" [xv:8-9] (Intro) and [15:8] (2.4.1.1) lower case all the type names here [29:35] change "constants" to "literal constants" [31:1-2] all lower case on these 2 lines [31:15-17] change the sentence "Among the kind values that provide a given range, one providing the smallest range is returned by the intrinsic function SELECTED_INT_KIND (13.14.94)." to "The intrinsic function SELECTED_INT_KIND (13.14.94) returns a kind value based on a specified decimal range requirement." and move this sentence to after the following one, which mentions the RANGE intrinsic. [32:39-43] change the sentence "Among the kind values that provide a given precision and a given exponent range, one providing the smallest decimal precision is returned by the intrinsic function SELECTED_REAL_KIND (13.14.95)." to "The intrinsic function SELECTED_REAL_KIND (13.14.95) returns a kind value based on specified precision and decimal range requirements." and move this sentence to after the following one, which mentions the PRECISION and RANGE intrinsics. [33:9-11] (Note 4.7) use big font dots in .TRUE. and .FALSE. [43:5] (Note 4.30) add period after "created" [52:31-32] bold face "PRIVATE attribute" and "PUBLIC attribute" [53:29] (Note 5.10) change "of an" to "of" [54:40] change "an array pointer or an allocatable array" to "an allocatable array or an array pointer" [55:11] insert "<-list>" after "" [55:40-56:4] fix the size of the italic font characters to be the size for obsolete [58:10] unbolden "PUBLIC" and "PRIVATE" [62:1-3] change "DATA statement repeat factor" to "" twice [69:18] delete ", in common blocks," [70:17-18] move the "(11.4)" to after "unit" [71:33] change "12.5.2.1 and 12.4.1.5" to "12.4.1.1, 12.4.1.5, 12.4.1.6, and 12.5.2.1" [72:13] delete spurious blank at beginning of line [75:26] delete "(6.2.2)". [77:13] (Note 6.10) change "Z (3, 1)" to "Z (2, 1)" in the 3rd column of the last row of this array [88:16] change "12.3.1" to "12.3.2.1" [88:35,37,41] insert "of" after "shall be" [92:31,33,35,37] delete the "A" or "An" at the start of each constraint [93:20] (Note 7.15) delete "(7.1.6.2)" [95:37] insert "the" before "evaluation" [7:17] delete the reference to CCIR Recommendation 460-2 [236:14] change "CCIR Recommendation 460-2" to "ISO 8601:1988" [7:13] change "ISO 646:1983" to "ISO/IEC 646:1991" and in [37:7], [37:11], and [240:23] [7:17-18] delete the normative reference to IEC 559 and IEE 754 [33:20] change "IEC 559 (IEEE 754)" to "ANSI/IEEE 754-1985, IEEE standard for binary floating point arithmetic" [33:22-23] change "IEC 559" to "IEEE 754" (twice) Change margins to fit A4 paper width, with manual adjustments as necessary. Justify note headings left instead of right, and 'NOTE' in all caps in the heading to distinguish it from normative text. [5:1] delete spurious colon [40:13] delete spurious '"' [75: 9] 2nd line of Rank 3 entry, last col - change 's2)xd2' to 'j2)xd1' [75:10] 3rd line of Rank 3 entry, last col - change 's3)' to 'j3)' [92:29] line before R730 -change 'expression ' to expression.' [106:25] note 7.41, line 2 - use bold font for '* Y' [151:29-30] Table heading - put 2nd column heading on one line [166: 3] 2nd last para, line 2 - change '|exp>999' to '|exp|>999' [166: 5] last para, line 2 -change '|k|leading' to '|k| leading' [166:17] para 4, line 2 - change 'yyyx' to 'yyy.x' [166:32] para 5, line 2 - change '|exp>999' to '|exp|>999' [178:36] para 5, 2nd last line - change 'character such' to 'such character' [209:28] 2nd last para, line 1 - change 'INstead' to 'Instead' [210:38] section 12.6 heading - change 'Pure Procedures' to 'Pure procedures' [215:19] section 13.3 heading - change 'Intrinsic Procedures' to 'intrinsic procedures' [292:32] add ' :' after ')' in Annex A entries for generic identifier [292:32], numeric type [294:14], and transformational function [296:39] [299:28] B.1.1 heading - change 'Double Precision DO-Variables' to 'double precision DO-variables' [301:31] B.1.5 heading - change 'Edit Descriptor' to 'edit descriptor' [ xvi:23] Intro, Organization, Program units, para 3, line 1 - change 'OPERATOR option on interface blocks' to 'OPERATOR option in interface blocks" [ xvi:25] Intro, Organization, Program units, para 3, line 1 - change 'ASSIGNMENT option on interface blocks' to 'ASSIGNMENT option in interface blocks" [14:38] item (3) - split into two numbered items as follows: (With item (4) in obsolescent font) (3) END=, ERR=, and EOR= specifiers may result in a branch. (4) Alternate returns may result in a branch. [171: 5] last para, line 1 - change 'optional on the slash edit descriptor' to 'optional in the slash edit descriptor' [185:14] last para, line 1 - change 'ONLY option on the USE statement' to 'ONLY option in the USE statement' [192:26] para after constraints after R1207, line 3 - change 'name on a procedure heading' to 'name in a procedure heading' [205:41] 2nd constraint after R1220 - change 'present on the end-function-stmt' to 'present in the end-function-stmt' [206: 1] 5th constraint after R1220, line 1 - change 'present on the end-function stmt' to 'present in the end-function-stmt' [207:32] 1st constraint after R1224, line 1 - change 'specified on the end subroutine-stmt' to 'specified in the end-subroutine-stmt' [207:36] 4th constraint after R1224, line 1 - change 'present on the end subroutine-stmt' to 'present in the end-subroutine-stmt' [208:34-35] 2nd para after constraints, line 4 - change 'specified on the ENTRY statement' to 'specified in the ENTRY statement' [208:35] Section 12.5.2.5, 2nd para after constraints, line 5 - change 'named on the ENTRY statement' to 'named in the ENTRY statement' [208:36] 2nd para after constraints, line 6 - change 'named on the FUNCTION statement' to 'named in the FUNCTION statement' [208:40] Section 12.5.2.5, 3rd para after constraints, line 1 - change 'specified on the ENTRY statement' to 'specified in the ENTRY statement' [208:40-41] 3rd para after constraints, line 1 - change 'specified on the FUNCTION statement' to 'specified in the FUNCTION statement' [208:45] 4th para after constraints, line 3 - change 'specified on the ENTRY statement' to 'specified in the ENTRY statement' [209: 1] 5th para after constraints, line 1 - change 'specified on the SUBROUTINE statement' to 'specified in the SUBROUTINE statement' [209:26] Section 12.5.2.5, 3rd last para, line 2 - change 'RECURSIVE on the initial... statement' to 'RECURSIVE in the initial... statement' [209:29] 2nd last para, line 2 - change 'specified on the SUBROUTINE or FUNCTION statement' to 'specified in the SUBROUTINE or FUNCTION statement' [209:32] 2nd last para, line 2 - change 'specified on the SUBROUTINE or FUNCTION statement' to 'specified in the SUBROUTINE or FUNCTION statement' [247: 8] Note 13.10 - change 'Note that the' to 'The' [247:24] Section 13.14.59, Note 13.11 - change 'Note that the' to 'The' [313:11-12] para after Example 1, lines 5-6 - change 'required on the EXIT statement' to 'required in the EXIT statement' [313:12] para after Example 1, line 6 - change 'optional on the CYCLE statement' to 'optional in the CYCLE statement' ======================================================================= Dr Miles Ellis CCCCCCCCCCC Director: Educational Technology Resources Centre C C University of Oxford, 37-41 Wellington Square C E Oxford OX1 2JF, ENGLAND C T C R Telephone: +44 1865 270528 Fax: +44 1865 270527 C C Email: Miles.Ellis@etrc.ox.ac.uk CCCCCCCCCCC =======================================================================