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Subject: CD Ballot Comments - 6 of 7

6.      Japanese Comments


Item No. : 1
    Page 5
    Subclause 1.6.2
    Qualifier : minor Editorial
    Proposal :  Line 1
                Delete the ":."



Item No. : 2
    Page 40
    Subclause 4.4.1
    Qualifier : minor Editorial
    Proposal :  Line 13
                Delete the """.



Item No. : 3
    Page 75
    Subclause 6.2.2.2
    Qualifier : minor Editorial
    Proposal :  Lines 9 and 10
                Change "s2" to "j2" and "s3" to "j3"



Item No. : 4
    Page 77
    Subclause 6.2.2.3.2
    Qualifier : minor Editorial
    Proposal :  Line 13
                Change "Z(3,1)" to "Z(2,1)"



Item No. : 5
    Page 77
    Subclause 6.2.2.3.2
    Qualifier : minor Editorial
    Proposal :  Line 15
                Change "may" to "shall"




Item No. : 6
    Page 87
    Subclause 7.1.2
    Qualifier : minor Editorial
    Rationale : Table 7.1 contains unary operators
    Proposal :  Line 19
                Delete the "binary."



Item No. : 7
    Page 122
    Subclause 8.1.3.2
    Qualifier : minor Editorial
    Proposal :  Line 36
                Change "EQ" to "LE"



Item No. : 8
    Page 122
    Subclause 8.1.3.2
    Qualifier : minor Editorial
    Proposal :  Line 37
                Change "EQ" to "LE"



Item No. : 9
    Page 166
    Subclause 10.5.1.2.2
    Qualifier : minor Editorial
    Proposal :  Line 3
                Add "|" after "exp."



Item No. : 10
    Page 250
    Subclause 13.14.66
    Qualifier : minor Editorial
    Proposal :  Line 4
                Add ",...,dn" after dDIM+1"
                Add ")" after "dn."





Item No. : 11
    Page 280
    Subclause 14.6.2
    Qualifier : minor Editorial
    Proposal :  Lines 45 and 46
                Delete "The initial association status of a pointer is
undefined".

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