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From: Martin Sebor <msebor@gmail.com>
Subject: editorial tweak to DR 498 TC
To: sc22wg14@open-std.org, Blaine Garst <blaine@mac.com>
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The text of the C standard is organized into clauses and subclauses
(see Introduction).  The Technical Corrigendum accepted this morning
for DR 498 refers to a section.  It would be made clearer if it used
the term subclause instead.  Doing so would obviate the question as
to whether "section" in this context is intended to refer to just
7.22.7, or also meant to extend to the parent subclause 7.22, or
even all of clause 7.

Since we agreed that the intent is the first of the three I suggest
to tweak the text to use the term subclause instead:

   A call to any one of these functions may introduce a data race
   with a call to any other function in this <ins>subclause</ins>
   <del>section.

Martin